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  1. Nice collapse of moments, surfaces, collections of things etc, from the walk but how do you bring them together into one coherent composition? Refer to the idea of time mapped through layers, for example geological strata, so you can start to relate our experience of walk as a layer on top of Janet Cardiff’s and what comes before and after? On the other hand, your composition is like the painting we saw on Tuesday of John the Baptist that brings multiple events into one frame which is great! You might need to add more layers of information, or start to code these moments to show what existed according to Cardiff’s account, versus our experience as well as before and after, and where do these time periods overlap? We need to understand how to read time through your drawing more clearly but we like how its already quite spatial!

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