My two brief and direct questions (!):
- This is the current state of my microcosm drawing, please can you suggest changes? Also I’m not sure it needs to be printed at A1, rather A2 or just a double page spread in the magazine?
2. This is the current state of my project statement, please can you suggest changes?
“Stemming from considerations of time and experience, I have been interrogating the issue of Pause. The prevalence of a ‘perceived’ and an ‘actual’ pause emerged, which are embodied within architecture through the widespread practice of designing as if spaces and cities will never change. Through a design research process across five issues, culminating in a crafted environment, I have attempted to quantify Pause and change at an architectural scale through the microcosm of Grand Central Terminal in New York.”
[Creative inspiration sourced from Danielle’s comment last week…. I couldn’t succinctly explain each magazine so I didn’t]
Thanks very much!
(P.S. It doesn’t actually seem as if final tutorials have even happened yet or that there is only a week to go!)